A supernatural alarm call…
Normally I would have been waking to my usual alarm, and slumping out of bed for my paper round. Today I wake up and I see a flash light, bright, almost blinding me. Next thing I knew, aliens were coming into my house seeking something. I ask them, trembling, “what do you want?” they reply “we want you”. I ran as fast as I could but they took me to their hovercraft and probed me for clues. They were looking for something they had hidden on Earth a long time ago. Something I had seen before.
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I love this – brilliant word choices, Christian. Well done.
Great Work Christian! What was it that you had seen? I want to read more! Miss Ashton
I love the opening, I can just see you slumping out of bed! I agree with Miss Ashton, I want to know what happens next.
well done
What an exciting story, well done, Christian. I would love to know what the aliens were looking for and I hope the poor narrator didn’t suffer too much as they tried to find it. Be careful with the tense, you kept changing and it was a little hard to follow. The excellent adjectives made the story seem very real. Well done, I hope to read more of your writing.
Me Leatherdale (Team 100wc)
What a great story!