Out Of The Blue…(By Rhiannon)

4 Feb

100wcgu-72

This short story is entered into 100WC (a short story competition inviting young writers to create a 100 word piece following on from the weekly prompt issued). This week’s prompt: Out of the blue…

Out of the blue a tornado consumed by lightning stormed across the hills, down towards the village, burning anything and everything in its path when it hit the village. Everything and everyone was flying and crashing and burning. Then it vanished, only to reappear in the bright, buzzing city and destroyed everything. People homeless, helpless, and some even dead from flying and crash landing on the ground breaking fragile necks. It was the ugliest sight you’ve ever seen: houses all over the place and there – a tiny baby barely alive and clinging to its injured mother. Would she be ok? Would she?

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3 Responses to “Out Of The Blue…(By Rhiannon)”

  1. Vic 100wc February 6, 2013 at 8:35 am #

    Wow Rhiannon, what an excellent vocabulary you have, and so well used here! Your use of adjectives and adverbs is also brilliant, meaning that you have created a very descriptive piece of writing here. Well done!

  2. amanderson66 February 7, 2013 at 8:30 am #

    Great use of listing and dynamic verb choices. Great work!

    • mrsjmaitland February 7, 2013 at 8:14 pm #

      Rhiannon – super vocabulary and focused, independent work all session- your concentration paid off!!

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